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Feedback: Showdown at the Saloon

The Following Are Comments from FCF and Hostboard on the story Showdown at the Saloon!

goliadmike: “Dang girl! That was stronger than nine acres of garlic! I can just imagine ol’ Brie prancing around the saloon like a prize heifer…after her boobs recover.

Great Read. Thanks for the story!”

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Autumn: “Sizzling prose!”

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User1: “How have I not read this masterpiece until now, just wow, I’m flashed. 🙂

Perfect from the very beginning to the bitter end.

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User1 Again! “Everyone who enjoys titfight stories, read this, you will not be disappointed!”

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JB57: Great story! Really nicely written (though it reminds me of why I have no use for Texas) and a great character study of the two women. Your use of them tying each other up was really clever. I was really hoping their encounter would end in a sexfight, but what you gave us was very intriguing and appealing nonetheless. The forced oral sex was fitting. Is there any possibility of a rematch in the future between these two women? From the way the story ended, Brie got one heck of an orgasm out of Kylie and, while she dominated the other woman in this encounter, I get the sense that Kylie can be pushed into a corner only so far without fighting back – just like Brie did. Great work! 

JB57

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A.Penman: “…she brought in a hand. One she brought from cheek to crevice then down. Not just down, but in, pushin’ it gently into Brie’s forbidden darkstar, only a chick’s hiccup before the brunette came.”

I wish I could come up with lines like this…and so many others…

Once again, great work!

But I’m with JB57 on this one as I, too, was hoping it would end in a sexfight.

A.P.

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