9 thoughts on “Who Are You? by Rival’s Rapture

  1. Giannis says:

    I woud prefer another end of the story but it was very well written .

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      Thank you! I am so glad you liked it. There wasn’t a TON of eroticism in it, but enough to still keep it feeling sexy through the pain, panic, and emotion.

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  2. hankmccoy02 says:

    Excellent story. I’m a sucker for the “women at war over a disputed lover” plotline, which tends to be ever-prevalent in this genre/fetish. Cliché do it may be; most of my favourite stories feature a variation on this theme. Also, this read like a spiritual successor to “Who is this?” (which is perhaps my favourite Rival’s Rapture tale).

    The action was evenly-contested and compelling. The tone was at times cruel, spiteful, and erotic; without ever veering into excessively brutal territory.

    My happy place in other words 🙂

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      I feel like it’s a cliche that’s still fun to use, and one that a LOT of readers in this genre prefer, even if they’ve seen it a hundred times.

      I definitely wanted to give it the same element of attacks that felt desperate and unrestrained, but also keep from becoming true monsters.

      I’m glad that you see that mission as having been accomplished, and that I hit your sweet spot! You so often hit mine!

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  3. JT Edson says:

    Fantastic story! It was so intense. The winner was in doubt almost till the end. I also made a comment on your Free Catfight Forum page.

    Great stuff. Amazing!

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      Thank you for posting there, and here! The more feedback the better! :3

      I’m also glad I kept you in suspense as to who was going to win. I always try to do that in my stories.

      The feeling of tension was something I really wanted to capture, so that it matched, at least in some way, Who is This? Which this was to be a spiritual successor/sister story to.

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  4. SexfightEnthusiast says:

    Wow, very good story writing. Not only you stay with the original plot of wife vs mistress which to me is the only reason to have fought, but fought inexperience at the beginning, n slowly evolve into primal instinct. N lastly from physical fight to sexfight. Gone is the counter argument by some that if a man require fighting over, then he is not worth keeping theory. I have yet to read part 2 ….. I m afraid to continue, or at least let me recuperate from my last um shoot. Great work.

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