15 thoughts on “Backseat Battle 2 by Rival’s Rapture

  1. gaeng says:

    Mind-blowing at the very least. I love it when both rivals get so caught up in their shared intimacy and want even more from each other, no matter what.

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      Yes! That is a very important aspect of sexfights, though you and I might be the only ones to feel that way. Most writers have their characters feel the pleasure, but not get lost in it.

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  2. dermonarch says:

    What a great tension. I love this one. Is equal good as “Who is this” for me and better than the first part.

    That it also get the “Who is this” get mentioned is a cool thing.

    And the end! Again, the end! Driven by fear to losing her man she risks it, and will lose it. Not by losing her fight, but by other circumstances.

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      Thank you, Dermonarch! I am so glad you liked it! This has been one of the stories where writing a sequel, and your comment alone makes me feel like I made the right decision in pushing through.

      Again, thank you. :,)

      <3

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  3. Giannis says:

    I am a “first timer” (an idiom of mine, I know that this phrase is not used). I mean, I like to read/write erotic stories about two women who sexfight for any reason BUT the FIRST TIME they do so. (NOTICE : their first time together, not their first time in general). I am not for sequels, to read again about the same women to make it out. If one of them faces another woman in a next chapter, no problem. I am in. But the same women together again… not my cup of tea. Each with its own taste i guess.

    That being said… because of this story there is an exception to my rule.
    Why?
    1. the plot was AMAZING !! Intriguing, full of twists.
    2. there was a building erotic tension, sometimes it was unbearable for the two women.
    3. It was very well written !! It was literary written erotic story !! I read it and i felt the tension, the passion. It was like a story written by a famous writer !
    4. It was hot. Maybe not extremely hot as ch. 1 (i would prefer more trib, my taste) but it was hot, that’s for sure.

    Now… playing the game to think about San and Brenda like they are real women :
    a. Mark was the reason of their sexfight ? I am not that sure. I suppose that the two women had missed their sexfight and they found an excuse to feel each other again.
    b. Their feelings for each other… Oh my !! In many sexfight stories there is a mix of lust, competition, passion, rivalry, hate, love. But in this masterpiece of RR the recipe is not the same. The feelings go deeper. Same ingredients of the classic feelings during a sexfight but in a different dose and – mostly – in a different way to mix all these feelings together.

    Not an “easy” story. It makes you to start thinking about these two women like they are real.

    It was not the hotter story RR has written till now. But, for my taste at the very least, it was the more literary one ! A perfect erotic story, written by a really talented pen.

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      Giannis, this is high, high praise, especially from a fellow writer like yourself.

      I can see being a little cool on sequels, and had there not been such a strong push for this one in particular, I would not have written it.

      But still, just as you felt the two characters felt real, now that I have made it through this tale, I have fallen in love with both BRenda and Samantha, just like I have Lauren and Claire from Who is this?. Which means despite your preference and mind, they’ll likely get another tale, somewhere down the line.

      With all that said, again thank you. I know it had trib for only a fraction of the story, but I had you in mind while writing the tale — of that you can be sure.

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  4. Giannis says:

    I would love reading ch. 3. Besides, according to the known saying, some rules have a few exceptions which just add some emphasis to them!

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      JL, what would you have done with the story, to make it the ending you would have preferred? I’d love to hear your take.

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  5. apenman says:

    As always, your verbal imagery astounds me! You are truly a great writer!

    Slight problem…I can’t seem to locate Part 1…is it posted here?

    A. Penman

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