10 thoughts on “Just Trust Me by Rival’s Rapture

  1. Giannis says:

    The end ????

    I read all the story hoping for their next step and you stopped when it started !! A BIG tease !!!
    OK, i do not complain. let’s call it a “friendly titfight”. I hoped for the “full packet” of a sexfight (where the main plate would be a wild p…y vs p…y fight) but i liked that too, as it was sensual and friendly as well.
    I guess that some of your readers (who prefer rough @ violent moments to be shared) may hate you for exactly the same reason ! LOL Each with each own taste…

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      Ha ha, sorry! I knew you’d be disappointed with my ending on the trib. My reasoning was that I wanted the story to be short. And I didn’t want them to have a sexfight just yet. So I decided to end it there.

      And yes, it was friendly. And though that will irk some people, there are other’s that would be super into it.

      I try to write stories from different segments of the fetish, so not every story will be for everyone. Still though, I am glad you liked it for what it was. <3

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  2. dermonarch says:

    That was interesting. It was relaxing to read a story about a Titfight, where it wasn’t about any higher stakes. Just a friendly quarrel where there is no real loser at the end anyway. And the length was just right for that.

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      That’s exactly what I was hoping to deliver. It isn’t a tale of love or hate — vengeance or consequence. It’s just two girls titfighting because the idea was presented to them.

      It was important to me to keep it short, because it was a story without consequence, but also because, for a story without a real feud, it didn’t need a long runway.

      It won’t be for everyone, but I’ve had the story in my mind for so long, I just had to get it out.

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      1. dermonarch says:

        But, although the conflict and possible consequences are missing, this story is not boring. That is also a remarkable accomplishment.

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  3. Jon Grey says:

    Soft, sensual, and so much fun! They enjoyed each other’s bodies wonderfully in this, from the kiss, to the feel of their breasts against each other. Thanks for this nice change of pace story!

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  4. apenman says:

    This is like reading a long, epic poem. Such lyricism! Again, I scratch my head wishing that I could write like this! Like my friend Giannis, I look forward to a continuation of the P vs P…

    A. Penman

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      You always shower me in such praise, it makes it hard to stay on the ground! he he

      But still, I am so glad you like my work. Especially the lyricism I try to have. I think you might be the only person who notices that aspect of my stories. Or at least the only one who comments on it. <3

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  5. apenman says:

    The praise is well deserved, Rivalsrapture. You’re the writer I most like to read.
    I have endeavored to write like you in the past, but the results always came out rather maudlin…

    I do love the English language though. I love the way you can play with the words and the shadings and the innuendo…That and my love of humor/irony/sarcasm is what keeps me writing…

    A.P.

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  6. JB57 says:

    Hi! Love the story, though it was not what I expected. Are you planning a rematch between Brie and Kylie, her rival bartender from the first story? A more confrontational battle, one that becomes a sexfight, would be my hope/preference. At any rate, I hope you have more stories about Brie and her various friends/foes in store!

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